Now, you can see where I will be going with this story. The real title of the novel will either be "Back From The Grave" or "A Phoenix Shall Arise". By the way, no, that was not really Abby who made Grams faint on the previous page. She did not come back from the dead, but the story ending has a bit of a mild twist to it as the reader finds out who she really is. In my story, Dawson later returns home and meets up with "Abby". The girl claims her name is Allison, and she and Dawson end up spending a lot of time together. At the end, Dawson meets up with Allison at her house. Outside the house is Jack. This surprises Dawson, but it is not as much of a surprise as Allison has for him (thus the ironic twist at the end). Please let me know what you think about this and the next story. |